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You have recently ordered an item through online shopping, but are not happy with the purchase.

You have recently ordered an item through online shopping, but are not happy with the purchase. kYNb8

Dear Sir, I am regularly shopping from your online shopping store. Until I feel satisfied with earlier ordered. I am writing this letter to registered complaint about recent order. The order number is 345. I ordered T shirt with large size, red color and made with cotton fabric. I am happy with your services but when I got product I am very disappointed because size and color has been not matched as per ordered. Also I feel some issues with fabric it is not as mentioned. I suggest if you have matched item with ordered you can replace with it. Also one option is there you can give me exchange with another one I have no issue with this otherwise you can start process for refund. I request, you personally look in to this matter and consider this on priority basis. Yours Faithfully, Jignesh patel

Dear Sir,

I am regularly
 shopping from your online shopping store. “Until” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Until
 I feel satisfied with earlier You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcontrolledorganizedarranged
ordered
. I am writing this letter to registered complaint about recent order. The order number is 345. I You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcontrolledorganizedarranged
ordered
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.T-shirt
T shirt
 with large size, red color and made with cotton fabric.

I am happy with your services This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 when I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 product I am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 disappointed This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 size and color has been not matched as per You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcontrolledorganizedarranged
ordered
. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Also,
Also
 I feel This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 issues with fabric it is not as mentioned.

I suggest if you have matched item with You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcontrolledorganizedarranged
ordered
 you can replace with it. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Also,
Also
 one option is there you can give me exchange with another one I have no issue with this otherwise
 you can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 process for refund.

I request, you personally
 look in to this matter and consider this on priority basis.

Yours Faithfully
,

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