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Formal Accepting letter about training event.

Formal Accepting letter about training event. 0AXO5

Dear Mrs Rossetti. I am writing you to tell my reply about training event. On the 12th of September I accepted your invitation letter. After I read all your offers I had decided to visit to your renewed hospital with personal skilled assistant. The seminar will be organized for morning of Friday, September 16th which is suitable to our time-table that I am free on that day. All of our practical sessions are held with interestingly, which is useful and successful to every manager and worker. At present abundance tools in new fashion shape are being brought for numerous both public hospital and private hospital too. I have been supporting employees with how using methods and steps of their instructions for five years. Admittedly I have got a number of experiences and abundance certificates with working them. I have been awarded with numerous diploma and a kind of speciality by famous department. In your letter you asked me about providing necessary resource to me for making presentation. I refuse, because I have got essential things that I do not have any issue with them. I consent to your suggest. If I support with solving problem I would be grateful. I look forward to seeing you. Yours sincerely Jack Robin.

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tell
 my reply about training This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionhappening
event
. On the 12th of September I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:admissible
accepted
 your invitation letter. “After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
 I read all your offers I had decided to visit to your renewed hospital with personal skilled assistant. The seminar will be organized
 for morning of Did you mean to refer to the current year? September 16th, 2021 is not a Friday, but a Thursday.
Friday, September 16th
 which is suitable to our time-table that I am free on that day. All of our practical sessions are held
 with interestingly
, which is useful and successful to every manager and worker. At present abundance tools in new fashion shape are being brought
 for numerous both public hospital and private hospital too. I have been supporting employees with how using methods and steps of their instructions for five years. Admittedly
 I have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 a number of experiences and abundance certificates with working them. I have been awarded
 with numerous diploma and a kind of Possible spelling mistake. 'speciality' is British English.specialty
speciality
 by This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:well-known
famous
 department. In your letter you asked me about providing necessary resource to me for making presentation. I refuse, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 essential things that I do not have any issue with them. I consent to your suggest. “If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If
 I support with solving problem I would be grateful. I look forward to seeing you. Yours sincerely
 Jack Robin. 