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Write an application letter for a job of a tour guide which you saw advertised in "Weekly" newspaper

Write an application letter for a job of a tour guide which you saw advertised in "Weekly" newspaper awkdP

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to apply for a job of a tour guide which I saw advertised in "Weekly" newspaper. I am thirty-six years old and obtained a degree in teaching English as a Foreign Language in the University of World Languages in 2005. I am presently working as an English teacher at school where I have been for the last six years. I feel I have many of the important qualifications needed for this job. I am proactive and able to handle multiple tasks simultaneously. In addition to this, I participate in Computer course. If you would like me to attend an interview, I would be able to come at any time convenient to you, as I do want to be a member of your company. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Emily Whatson

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