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You have recently found a job vacancy in the local newspaper. Write a letter to the company and say what position you are applying to and where it was advertised. In your letter, include some information about your skills, education and experience. Explain why you are interested in this job.

You have recently found a job vacancy in the local newspaper. Write a letter to the company and say what position you are applying to and where it was advertised. In your letter, include some information about your skills, education and experience. Explain why you are interested in this job. 56X7P
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to applying for the job of a computer programmer in your company after seeing an advertisement in the Local newspaper “THE PUNJAB”. In this regard, I would like to mention that I have a masters degree in computer science as well as I have done two diploma courses in programming languages i. e. java and asp(dot)net. Thus, I am suitable for this job as per the requirements given in the advertisement. Apart from this, I have two years of work experience in a software company named Infotech where I was working as a Project Manager. Presently, I am working in an MNC in Noida for the last year which far from my hometown Punjab. Although I am getting higher wages here as compare to my previous job, I feel homesick here. I wish to go back to my parents and to get a job which does not depart us. Additionally, I must say that I have strong work experience and technical skills that prepared me to do work under any tough circumstances. Therefore, it could be helpful for this job role. kindly consider my application for this job. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully,
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to applying for the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
job
of a computer programmer in your
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company
after seeing an advertisement in the Local newspaper “THE PUNJAB”.

In this regard, I would like to mention that I have a
For an academic degree, use "master’s".
masters
degree in computer science
as well
as I have done two diploma courses in programming languages
There should be no space here: "i.e.".
i. e.
java and asp(dot)net.
Thus
, I am suitable for this
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job
as per the requirements
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given
in the advertisement. Apart from this, I have two years of work experience in a software
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
named
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Infotech
where I was working as a Project Manager.

Presently
, I am working in an
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MNC
in Noida for the last year which far from my hometown Punjab. Although I am getting higher wages here as compare to my previous
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
job
, I feel homesick here. I wish to go back to my parents and to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
a
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job
which does not depart us.
Additionally
, I
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must
say that I have strong work experience and technical
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
that prepared me to do work under any tough circumstances.
Therefore
, it could be helpful for this
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job
role.
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kindly
consider my application for this job.

I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours
faithfully
,
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IELTS letter You have recently found a job vacancy in the local newspaper. Write a letter to the company and say what position you are applying to and where it was advertised. In your letter, include some information about your skills, education and experience. Explain why you are interested in this job.

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6 paragraphs
203 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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