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You have recently ordered an item on the internet.

You have recently ordered an item on the internet. Qw099

This letter is to inform you that I am a little disappointed with the item that I ordered from your online store last July 29, 2021 Friday. The bag has red stains on the right lower side of it and I thought it would be ok but my friends saw it and told me that the stains were so obvious. It was plain back pack colored in green that has 3 zippered compartments where you can put your stuffs and has an average size for a person that has an average height. It was also on sale by the time that I ordered it so I also want to know if I could have it replaced and get a new one with the same color and design. I am expecting that my concern would be addressed as soon as possible as the back pack will be used for my upcoming vacation. I’m looking forward for your kind confirmation on my Email. Thank you! Yours Sincerely, Benigno F. Ilagan

This letter is to inform you that I am a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
 disappointed with the item that I ordered from your online store last July 29, Some style guides suggest that commas should set off the year in a month-day-year date: "2021,".2021,
2021
 Friday. The bag has red stains on the right lower side of it and I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonedassumedbelievedconsidered
thought
 it would be ok This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 my friends This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 it and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :informed
told
 me that the stains were This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 obvious.

It was plain back pack colored in green that has 3 zippered compartments where you can put your stuffs and has an average size for a person that has an average height.

It was also
 on sale by the time that I ordered it This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I also
 want to know if I could have it replaced and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 a new one with the same color and design.

I am expecting that my concern would be addressed
 as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible as the back pack will be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 for my upcoming vacation. I’m looking forward for your kind confirmation on my Email. Thank you!

Yours Sincerely
,

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