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A letter for professor for admission

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Prospect student fall 2022/ PhD supervision info. Dear professor. . . . . My name is Artman and I am student of top ranked university of Iran, the university of Tehran I have completed a Bachelor of sociology at this university and currently, I study in the Master of International Relations at there with the best scores And my dissertation subject is about national security and the impact of hydro politics dynamism of Aras Recently I have visited your research articles and read a few of them and found that I can pursue my interest in your research interest area My particular interest subject is a combination of security, Geoeconomics, migration and environmental development And I am warmly enthusiastic if I conduct my research along with your supervision. Since I was Determined that you read my email I didn't attach my CV in case it wouldn't go to spam Automatically. I am thankfully looking forward to your positive response Best regards, Artman
Prospect student fall 2022/ PhD supervision info.

Dear professor.
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My name is
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
Artman and
I am student of top ranked university of Iran, the university of Tehran

I have completed a Bachelor of sociology at this university and
currently
, I study in the Master of International Relations at there with the best scores

And my dissertation subject is about national security and the impact of hydro politics dynamism of Aras

Recently I have visited your research articles and read a few of them and found that I can pursue my interest in your research interest area

My particular interest subject is a combination of security,
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Geoeconomics
, migration and environmental development

And I am
warmly
enthusiastic if I conduct my research along with your supervision.

“Since” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Since
I
was Determined
that you read my email I didn't attach my CV in case it wouldn't go to spam
Automatically
.

I am
thankfully
looking forward to your
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positive
response

Best regards,

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Artman
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IELTS letter A letter for professor for admission

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9 paragraphs
161 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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