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you live near a university and would like to earn some extra money by renting a room in your apartment. to a student.

you live near a university and would like to earn some extra money by renting a room in your apartment. to a student. 26OMX

Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Kate and I am working as a Software Engineer in Adaptavist Sdn Bhd. I lived alone by myself in a 3 room apartment nearby your university. I’m writing this letter to you because I would like to rent out 1 of my available rooms to the university students. My apartment is located 1 block away from the university. The resident is a walking distance from the university. There is also a nearby train station which connects to the city and a nearby shopping mall. This enables easy access for the student to get groceries and other necessities. The resident is ready to move in as it is fully furnished which includes a single bed for each room, study table and built-in wardrobe. The condominium also has a fully functioning kitchen where the student will be able to cook when needed. I am looking forward to your update on this. Sincerely, Kate

Dear Sir or Madam,

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I am looking forward to your update on this.

Sincerely
,

Kate