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Explain why you want to work in company's head office for six months

Explain why you want to work in company's head office for six months 6lOw0
Dear Mr. Azad, Hi, I am Homeira Montazeri who working in your marketing department. I am writting this letter to inform you that due to some private reasons, I have to go to Germany from October 2021 until end of March 2022. Since the head office of the company I am working is located in Frankfurt, capital city; I am very eager to work there during this time. This can be a significant chance for me to continue my duties in their office. Earning much more information how they work, behave to clients as well as their techniques to enter new markets, is one of main reasons. Basically, being trained in center office will cause improvement in my future career. Besides, I can manage my job from long distance with modern facilities such social media, E- Mail and ets. I also could present in meeting on line. Therefore, none of my works will be suffered regardless of long distance. In order to make you sure that everything goes well-done, I send you weekly progress report as well. In considering the above, I will appreciate, if you assist me to be able to change my workplace only for this six months. I promise it effects my job as soon as I return back. All my colleagues plus myself talk about your supportive manner with employers and your great long term sight about training them. Hope I will be successful to receive your helpful advise. Sincerely your, Homeira Montazeri
Dear Mr.
Azad
,

Hi,

I am
Homeira
Montazeri
who working in your marketing department. I am
writting
this letter to inform you that due to
some
private reasons, I
have to
go to Germany from October 2021 until
end
of March 2022.

Since the head office of the
company
I am working
is located
in Frankfurt, capital city; I am
very
eager to work there during this time. This can be a significant chance for me to continue my duties in their office. Earning much more information how they work, behave to clients
as well
as their techniques to enter new markets, is one of main reasons.
Basically
,
being trained
in center office will cause improvement in my future career.

Besides
, I can manage my job from long distance with modern facilities such social media, E- Mail and
ets
. I
also
could present in meeting on line.
Therefore
, none of my works will
be suffered
regardless of long distance.

In order to
make
you sure that everything goes well-done, I
send
you weekly progress report
as well
.

In considering the above, I will appreciate, if you assist me to be able to
change
my workplace
only
for this six months. I promise it effects my job as
soon
as I
return back
.

All my colleagues plus myself talk about your supportive manner with employers and your great long term sight about training them.

Hope I will be successful to receive your helpful advise.

Sincerely
your,

Homeira
Montazeri
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IELTS letter Explain why you want to work in company's head office for six months

Letter
  American English
11 paragraphs
246 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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