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You would liketo work for a company or a organisation in a foreign country.

You would liketo work for a company or a organisation in a foreign country. 9akgj
Dear sir or madam, I am writing to apply for a job working abroad. I would be particularly interested in the building management sector. I have experience managing shopping malls, commercial real estates and spent a significant number of years employed by multinational property management companies such as JLL. I have developed excellent knowledge of working practices within the facility management industry and have outstanding interpersonal skills and the ability to be organised, punctual and hard-working. I am especially keen to find employment in the English-speaking world. I have degrees in both Electrical Engineering and Business Administration and am fluent speaker of the language. Obviously, this makes me more employable in these countries and would also give me the opportunity to improve my language skills further. The prospect of living and working abroad fills me with excitement and anticipation. I love the idea of experiencing new ways of doing things and I want to broaden my horizon and gain deeper understanding of different cultures. I must admit that what appeals also to me is the thought of being somewhere warmer and sun makes regular appearances. I have enclosed my curriculum vitae. However, if you require further details, please do not hesitate to contact me. I would be very willing to discuss my application at interview. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully,
Dear sir or madam,

I am writing to apply for a job working abroad.

I would be
particularly
interested in the building management sector.
I
have experience managing shopping malls, commercial real estates and spent a significant number of years employed by multinational property management
companies
such as
JLL
.
I
have developed excellent knowledge of working practices within the facility management industry and have outstanding interpersonal
skills
and the ability to be
organised
, punctual and
hard
-working.

I
am
especially
keen to find employment in the English-speaking world.
I
have degrees in both Electrical Engineering and Business Administration and am fluent speaker of the language.
Obviously
, this
makes
me more employable in these countries and would
also
give me the opportunity to
improve
my language
skills
further
.

The prospect of living and working abroad fills me with excitement and anticipation. I
love
the
idea
of experiencing new ways of doing things and I want to broaden my horizon and gain deeper understanding of
different
cultures. I
must
admit that what appeals
also
to me is the
thought
of being somewhere warmer and sun
makes
regular appearances.

I
have enclosed my curriculum vitae.
However
, if you require
further
details
,
please
do not hesitate to contact me. I would be
very
willing to discuss my application at interview.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
faithfully
,
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IELTS letter You would liketo work for a company or a organisation in a foreign country.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
224 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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