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How to spend your time in abroad ho

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Dear Mum. I'm writing to tell you about my last week in Rome as you wanted me to. My plane left the airport on Tuesday at 13: 00. I arrived to Rome at 21: 00. At first I went to the hotel to confirm my reservasion. The next day I went for some seightseeing. I visited hill of Buco Della Serature is in front of gate of embassy. The next morning I went to the market where between Panta Popte square and ports of Ponte Sublizio. Those markets were opened on Sundays for tourists that they came there in the morning. The markets fill of the antique items who keen on buying antique things. I bought a gold ring jawelary for you there. The weather wasn't fine that it was so hot and tired every day. I'm very pleased to be in one of the most beautiful cities in the entite world. Soon I'll phone you. Love Mary.
Dear Mum.

I'm writing to
tell
you about my last week in Rome as you wanted me to.

My
plane
left
the airport on Tuesday at 13: 00. I arrived to Rome at 21: 00. At
first I
went to the hotel to confirm my
reservasion
. The
next
day I went for
some
seightseeing
. I visited hill of
Buco
Della
Serature
is in front of gate of embassy. The
next
morning I went to the market where between
Panta
Popte
square and ports of
Ponte
Sublizio
. Those markets
were opened
on Sundays for tourists that they came there in the morning. The markets fill of the antique items who keen on buying antique things. I
bought
a gold ring
jawelary
for you there.

The weather wasn't fine that it was
so
hot and tired every day.

I'm
very
pleased
to be in one of the most
beautiful
cities in the
entite
world.

Soon
I'll phone you.

Love
Mary.
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IELTS letter How to spend your time in abroad ho

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  American English
7 paragraphs
158 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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