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You are due to move into a rented apartment next month but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to the course provider. In your letter, explain your situation describe your problems tell him/her when you think you can move in

You are due to move into a rented apartment next month but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to the course provider. In your letter, explain your situation describe your problems tell him/her when you think you can move in byRY

Dear Mr. Jackson, I am writing this letter to inform you that I will have to postpone my stay in the rented apartment contracted for next month. Although I was too excited about the stay, I will have to postpone my plan due to some personal reasons. Let me explain my problem. Yesterday night my brother was coming back from his work when he met with a terrific accident. I had to immediately admit him to the hospital that is near my place. The doctor said he will have to undergo surgery and will take time to recover. I know that its the time to shift to the newly rented apartment of yours but with the current situation, I will have to stay with my brother. I will have to take care of him and his doings until he gets back on his feet. I would like to request you to change the contract date from next month to two months from now. I will be readily available to shift to the new home by June. I would be grateful for your consideration. Please write me back about the contract details. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Sincerely, Ishita

Dear Mr. Jackson,

I am writing this letter to inform you that I will This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 postpone my stay in the rented apartment contracted for next
 month. Although I was too excited about the stay, I will This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 postpone my plan due to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 personal reasons.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
Let
 me This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpret
explain
 my problem. This is a non-standard collocation. Normally, "last night" is used.Last night
Yesterday night
 my brother was coming back from his work when he met with a terrific accident. I had to immediately admit him to the hospital that is
 near my place. The doctor said he will This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 undergo surgery and will take time to recover. I know that Did you mean "it's" (="it is") instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?it'sit is
its
 the time to shift to the newly
 rented apartment of yours This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 with the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
 situation, I will This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 stay with my brother. I will This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 take care of him and his doings until he This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquires
gets
 back on his feet.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 would like to request you to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 the contract date from next
 month to two months from This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 will be readily
 available to shift to the new home by June. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 would be grateful for your consideration. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
 write me back about the contract This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
. Looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours Sincerely
,

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