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You and your family are moving to another country for work, and you are looking to buy a house there. Write a letter to a property agent. In your letter: 1. Introduce yourself and your family 2. Describe the type of accommodation that you hope to find 3. Give your preference for the location of the accommodation

You and your family are moving to another country for work, and you are looking to buy a house there. Write a letter to a property agent. In your letter: 1. Introduce yourself and your family 2. Describe the type of accommodation that you hope to find 3. Give your preference for the location of the accommodation dWX7
Dear John I am writing this letter to express my interest of renting an apartment in Ontario, Canada. My name is Deep Karia and I am currently residing in India. My family includes me, my wife, a daughter. With God’s grace, I have got a job in Ontario, Canada and I will be moving to Canada after 3 months, may be in the month of March 2022. So, I am searching an apartment of 2 bedroom and 1 living room and kitchen for reside with my family. I got your reference from one of my friend in Canada, who also rented a house with your help. As I will be new to place with limited budget, I will prefer to rent an apartment or condo within 2000 CAD, in nearby area of Downtown. I would deeply appreciate it if you could help me in this matter, as I have heard very positive feedback about your service. Thanking you for your assistance in advance and looking forward to hear from you. Best Regards Deep Cean
Dear John

I am writing this letter to express my interest of renting an apartment in Ontario, Canada. My name is Deep
Karia and
I am
currently
residing in India. My family includes me, my wife, a daughter.

With God’s grace, I have
got
a job in Ontario, Canada and I will be moving to Canada after 3 months, may be in the month of March 2022.
So
, I am searching an apartment of 2 bedroom and 1 living room and kitchen for reside with my family. I
got
your reference from one of my friend in Canada, who
also
rented a
house
with your
help
. As I will be new to place with limited budget, I will prefer to rent an apartment or condo within 2000 CAD, in nearby area of Downtown.

I would
deeply
appreciate it if you could
help
me in this matter, as I have heard
very
positive
feedback about your service. Thanking you for your assistance in advance and looking forward
to hear
from you.

Best Regards

Deep
Cean
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IELTS letter You and your family are moving to another country for work, and you are looking to buy a house there. Write a letter to a property agent. In your letter: 1. Introduce yourself and your family 2. Describe the type of accommodation that you hope to find 3. Give your preference for the location of the accommodation

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  American English
4 paragraphs
173 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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