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You have just spent a weekend at a friend’s house. When you returned home, you discovered you have left a coat containing some belongings in his house. Write a letter to your friend telling him that you left the coat. Tell him what the coat looks like, where you think you left it and what was inside it. Make some suggestions about how to get it back.

You have just spent a weekend at a friend’s house. When you returned home, you discovered you have left a coat containing some belongings in his house. Write a letter to your friend telling him that you left the coat. Tell him what the coat looks like, where you think you left it and what was inside it. Make some suggestions about how to get it back. 7ko2
Dear Ann, I’m back at home now after that great weekend at your house. I hope you’re doing great and soon you‛ll be able to come and stay with me some time soon as well. Unfortunately, I had found out that I had left my coat at your house. Do you remember my black one that I wore when we went walking on Friday evening? It has two pockets on both sides, black buttons and black collar. I consider I left it in the hall. Do you remember we hung up our coats there when we got back from our walk? Another place that I could think of is the wardrobe in your room. I am really worried because I put my wallet and my passport in the pockets. Without them, I would face a lot of trouble. I would be grateful if you can mail it to me. Thanks again for wonderful weekend. I hope that you will find my coat. Go write back as soon as possible. Best wishes, Kate
Dear Ann,

I’m back at home
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now
after that great weekend at your
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house
. I hope you’re doing great and
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soon
you‛ll be able to
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come
and stay with me
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some
time
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soon
as well
.

Unfortunately, I had found out that I had
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
my coat at your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
. Do you remember my black one that I wore when we went walking on Friday evening? It has two pockets on both sides, black buttons and black collar. I consider I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
it in the hall. Do you remember we hung up our coats there when we
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got
back from our walk? Another place that I could
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think
of is the wardrobe in your room.

I am
really
worried
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because
I put my wallet and my passport in the pockets. Without them, I would face
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a lot of
trouble. I would be grateful if you can mail it to me.

Thanks again for wonderful weekend. I hope that you will find my coat. Go write back as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
as possible.

Best wishes,

Kate

IELTS letter You have just spent a weekend at a friend’s house. When you returned home, you discovered you have left a coat containing some belongings in his house. Write a letter to your friend telling him that you left the coat. Tell him what the coat looks like, where you think you left it and what was inside it. Make some suggestions about how to get it back.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
171 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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