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Write a letter to the Training Organiser. In your letter • expressing your interest in the role • requesting more information about it • explaining what experience you have Begin your letter as follows: Dear ..., You should write at least 150 words

Write a letter to the Training Organiser. In your letter • expressing your interest in the role • requesting more information about it • explaining what experience you have Begin your letter as follows: Dear. . . , KDM9

Dear Sir/Madam, I am one of the participants in your training program. I am writing this letter to express my interest for the position of event organiser. Yesterday during the end of the seminar there was a small announcement about the social event which is going to take place in UK during the tenure of our training. Would you kindly share with me more information about this social event such as what exactly it is for, is this a charity or for something like environmental awareness event? It would be more helpful if I could get more insight about this particular. During my graduation period I have helped my college in organizing many social events. I have very good experience with College fest and annual events along with that I had also lead the environmental awareness campaign arranged my our college last year. So I would be happy to assist you with your event and make it a huge success. Looking forward for your consideration. Yours faithfully, Yash.

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am one of the participants in your training program. I am writing this letter to express my interest for the position of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaffaircrisisceremonystorythingholiday
event
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organiser
. Yesterday during the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the seminar there was a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 announcement about the social You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaffaircrisisceremonystorythingholiday
event
 which is going to take place in UK during the tenure of our training.

Would you kindly share with me more information about this social You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaffaircrisisceremonystorythingholiday
event
 such as what exactly it is for, is this a charity or for something like environmental awareness You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaffaircrisisceremonystorythingholiday
event
? It would be more helpful if I could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 more insight about this particular.

During my graduation period I have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assisted
helped
 my college in organizing This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 social You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaffaircrisisceremonystorythingholiday
events
. I have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 experience with College fest and annual You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaffaircrisisceremonystorythingholiday
events
 along with that I had also
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lead
 the environmental awareness campaign arranged my our college last year. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 I would be happy to assist you with your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaffaircrisisceremonystorythingholiday
event
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 it a huge success.

Looking forward for your consideration.

Yours faithfully
,

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Yash
. 