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You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to a friend

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Dear Kiran, It has been a long time since we met each other. I hope you are doing great. I am writing this letter to inform you that I have recently moved to a new house in Bangalore. As you might know, I have been working at Ideapoke for a couple of years. Recently, they have shifted their head office to KR Puram which is quite far away from my previous house. As a result, most of my time is spent towards travel. To reduce my commute time, I moved to a rented house in KR Puram. It has two bedrooms, a kitchen, and an attached bathroom. This new house has a large garden providing enough space for ten people to relax. It is also located in a prime location close to RMZ Galleria Mall. Why don't you come over this weekend to my house? I am sure that you would enjoy yourself. I look forward to seeing you soon. Best Wishes, Sasank
Dear Kiran,

It has been a long time since we met each other. I hope you are doing great.

I am writing this letter to inform you that I have recently
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moved
to a new
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house
in Bangalore. As you might know, I have been working at
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Ideapoke
for a couple of years. Recently, they have shifted their head office to KR
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Puram
which is quite far away from my previous
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house
.

As a result
, most of my time
is spent
towards travel. To
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reduce
my commute time, I
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moved
to a rented
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house
in KR
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Puram
. It has two bedrooms, a kitchen, and an attached bathroom.

This new
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house
has a large garden providing
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enough
space for ten
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people
to relax. It is
also
located in a prime location close to
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RMZ
Galleria Mall.

Why don't you
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come
over this weekend to my
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house
? I am sure that you would enjoy yourself. I look forward to seeing you
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soon
.

Best Wishes,

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Sasank

IELTS letter You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to a friend

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
162 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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