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You feel that you and your mother cannot agree on anything. You need the advice from a problem page of a magazine.

You feel that you and your mother cannot agree on anything. You need the advice from a problem page of a magazine. PER2d
Dear Mrs/ Ms, I’ve got a problem and I really need your advice. It seems like my mother and I are not on the same board on anything. Every time I voice out my opinion, she rejects it outright and supposes that I’m too childish to make the decision. Once I was cooking my own lunch for school using a recipe from an internet website, she stood behind me and kept criticizing how I did things. It was honestly disturbing. The issue is the same with other situations. She can neither bear the ways I’m dressing, studying, entertaining, and socializing. I’ve tried a million times to communicate with her, but it’s never worked. She thinks I just want to attack her defense and betray her attempts of upbringing me. Now the harsh atmosphere at home makes me hardly breathe. Please let me know what I should do. Yours truly, Uyen
Dear Mrs/ Ms,

I’ve
got
a problem and I
really
need your advice. It seems like my mother and I are not on the same board on anything. Every time I voice out my opinion, she rejects it outright and supposes that I’m too childish to
make
the decision.

Once I was cooking my
own
lunch for school using a recipe from an internet website, she stood behind me and
kept
criticizing how I did things. It was
honestly
disturbing. The issue is the same with other situations. She can neither bear the ways I’m dressing, studying, entertaining, and socializing.

I’ve tried a million times to communicate with her,
but
it’s never worked. She
thinks
I
just
want to attack her defense and betray her attempts of upbringing me.

Now
the harsh atmosphere at home
makes
me hardly breathe.
Please
let
me know what I should do.

Yours
truly
,

Uyen
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IELTS letter You feel that you and your mother cannot agree on anything. You need the advice from a problem page of a magazine.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
149 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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