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email for customer to introduce tourism intinerary

email for customer to introduce tourism intinerary PELeE

Dear Ms Linh, Thank you for contacting my compay( America Discovery JSC), we are glad to have orporturnity to introduce my product. I’m would like to send inclusive tour: Visit Nha Trang province with discount rate. There are main point as below: 1. Intinerary: Hanoi to Camranh to Binh Ba insland 2. Total time: 4 days 3. Transportation: Round trip with free fee for 2 luggages 4. Hotel: Havana hotel ( hotel 5 star in Nha Trang have famous skylight club) Type of rooms: Double room with view sea for couples and family room for groups. 5. Packing cost: 300 $/per Comission: 5% of packing cost/person May and June is high season of Vietnam tourism due to airfares are increasing quickly, hotel room isn’t available. The longer time negotiation will be affected on the cost. We want to best quality offer for you so we hope you can make decision and sign contract as soon as. 6. Payment term: 50% payment deposit when we’ll sign contract 40% before 3 day department day of this tour 10% and cost incurred will pay when tourist check out hotel Attached you will find detail intinerary and demo contract below. If you would like any further information, please don’t hesitable contact me. I am looking forward hearing from you and I hope this choice is suitable for your summer vacation. Thanks you for your time and consideration Best regards, Hoa

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I am looking forward hearing from you and I hope this choice is suitable for your summer vacation.

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