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You are a sales person selling advertising space on a travel agency website. You have noticed a company spending a lot on advertising space on a competitor website. Write a letter requesting a meeting with the marketing manager of the company. In your letter • introduce your company • say why you would like to have a meeting with the marketing manager • suggest a convenient time

You are a sales person selling advertising space on a travel agency website. You have noticed a company spending a lot on advertising space on a competitor website. Write a letter requesting a meeting with the marketing manager of the company. In your letter • introduce your company • say why you would like to have a meeting with the marketing manager • suggest a convenient time brxgX
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to offer you a place on our site in attractive price compared to our rivals, which is attached with this letter. We, Afro Travel, commenced our business 30 years ago and have experience to serve numerous local and international organizations without any service issues. Our offering, for companies, is to provide solution of advertisement in various types of media from electronic to print; therefore, it is a one stop shop for advert. A meeting with Marketing manager will assist you to cut down cost on advertising, and it will also ensure best marketing strategy, which can enhance your company’s productivity for the future. Consequently, the benefit for both companies is immense. My schedule is wide open on Friday, 25th of this month unless you have any issues; please, inform me at your earliest if this is good. I am awaiting your response Sincerely, Toriqul Islam Khan Byron Senior executive-Sales
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to offer you a place on our site in attractive price compared to our rivals, which
is attached
with this letter.

We, Afro Travel, commenced our business 30 years ago and have experience to serve numerous local and international organizations without any service issues. Our offering, for
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
companies
, is to provide solution of advertisement in various types of media from electronic to print;
therefore
, it is a one
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stop
shop for advert.

A meeting with Marketing manager will assist you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cut
down cost on advertising, and it will
also
ensure best marketing strategy, which can enhance your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
’s productivity for the future.
Consequently
, the benefit for both
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
companies
is immense.

My schedule is wide open on Friday, 25th of this month unless you have any issues;
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
, inform me at your earliest if this is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
.

I am awaiting your response

Sincerely
,

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Toriqul
Islam Khan Byron

Senior executive-Sales
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IELTS letter You are a sales person selling advertising space on a travel agency website. You have noticed a company spending a lot on advertising space on a competitor website. Write a letter requesting a meeting with the marketing manager of the company. In your letter • introduce your company • say why you would like to have a meeting with the marketing manager • suggest a convenient time

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  American English
8 paragraphs
153 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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