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Request for Graduate Position Supervision

Request for Graduate Position Supervision Bgw09
Dear Professor Bla-Bla My Name is Fatemeh Nezhadian and I have completed my Master's degree in Information Systems Management with CGPA 4 and my Bachelor's degree in Computer Software Engineering with CGPA 3. 26 both from Islamic Azad University, Tehran, Iran. I turn to you for the graduate position in Bla-Bla. During my Master’s studies, I have been engaged in a research-based thesis with the title "Fraud Detection in Banking Transactions using Fuzzy Clustering and Particle Swarm Optimization Algorithm" which was gotten the 'A' grade. Moreover, I am a senior software developer in enterprise-scale applications with more than 12 years of work experience in the IT industry and I intend to continue my education in the Bla-Bla field from September 2022. I have good knowledge of English and I'm about to take my IELTS exam in October 2021. After glancing at your research summary I find out your field in Bla-Bla matches my research interest and is in parallel to the additional experiences and courses I have taken. I want to apply for the graduate program at the University of Bla-Bla under your supervision. I would be happy if I could join your team and if you too could consider me a potential candidate and give me acceptance for the Bla-Bla Fellowship. Please find my CV attached. Also, my Linkedin profile is accessible through https: //www. linkedin. com/in/flor-nezhadian-fn1985/ I am very grateful and looking forward to your positive response. Thank you for your time, Fatemeh Nezhadian
Dear Professor
Bla-Bla


My Name is
Fatemeh
Nezhadian
and I have completed my Master's degree in Information Systems Management with CGPA 4 and my Bachelor's degree in Computer Software Engineering with CGPA 3. 26 both from Islamic
Azad
University, Tehran, Iran. I turn to you for the graduate position in
Bla-Bla
.

During my Master’s studies, I have
been engaged
in a research-based thesis with the title
"
Fraud Detection in Banking Transactions using Fuzzy Clustering and Particle Swarm Optimization Algorithm
"
which
was gotten
the 'A' grade.
Moreover
, I am a senior software developer in enterprise-scale applications with more than 12 years of work experience in the IT industry and I intend to continue my education in the
Bla-Bla
field from September 2022. I have
good
knowledge of English and I'm about to take my IELTS exam in October 2021.

After glancing at your research summary I find out your field in
Bla-Bla
matches my research interest and is in parallel to the additional experiences and courses I have taken. I want to apply for the graduate program at the University of
Bla-Bla
under your supervision. I would be happy if I could
join
your team and if you too could consider me a potential candidate and give me acceptance for the
Bla-Bla
Fellowship.

Please
find my CV attached.
Also
, my
Linkedin
profile is accessible through
https
: //
www
.
linkedin
.
com
/in/flor-nezhadian-fn1985/

I am
very
grateful and looking forward to your
positive
response.

Thank you for your time,

Fatemeh
Nezhadian
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IELTS letter Request for Graduate Position Supervision

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
245 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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