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Write a letter to your manager to ask for some time off work.

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Dear Ms. Jane, I am writing this letter to explore the possibility of having a fortnight off from my work, from 12th June to 27th June, in order to complete my Advance diploma course in Digital Business and Trade. I am almost finished with the course, and now all I need to do is take the final exams which will start within two weeks. Luckily, I still have some unused annual leaves, and I want to finally use them up by taking the final exams to finish my diploma course. Having said that, however, if my company still feels that I would need to make up for those missing days at work, I would be more than happy to work on the weekends as well as show up early at work once the exams are over. For your kind information, this particular certification is important for me and the company since it will help me, in the capacity of a Senior Marketing Manager, to better position my company to tap into a huge number of prospective customers who want to buy our products online. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Sei
Dear Ms. Jane,

I am writing this letter to explore the possibility of having a fortnight off from my
work
, from 12th June to 27th June, in order to complete my Advance diploma course in Digital Business and Trade.

I am almost finished with the course, and
now
all I need to do is take the final exams which will
start
within two weeks. Luckily, I
still
have
some
unused annual
leaves
, and I want to
finally
use
them up by taking the final exams to finish my diploma course. Having said that,
however
, if my
company
still
feels that I would need to
make
up for those missing days at
work
, I would be more than happy to
work
on the weekends
as well
as
show
up early at
work
once the exams are over.

For your kind information, this particular certification is
important
for me and the
company
since it will
help
me, in the capacity of a Senior Marketing Manager, to better position my
company
to tap into a huge number of prospective customers who want to
buy
our products online.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
faithfully
,

Sei
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your manager to ask for some time off work.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
193 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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