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You have been invited to the engagement party of a friend from another country. You cannot go but you have bought a gift for him/her. W

You have been invited to the engagement party of a friend from another country. You cannot go but you have bought a gift for him/her. W 3L0N5
Dear Angela, I’m so happy to know that you and Robert are finally engaged. It feels like just yesterday when you were asking me for advice about whether he was the one meant for you. I can’t wait to see you in your wedding dress! I know you’re currently busy preparing for your engagement party, and of course, starting your wedding preparations, so forgive me in advance for adding to the stress. Unfortunately, I can't make it to your engagement party because it coincides with my comprehensive exams for my master's. I tried rescheduling, but my dean says there are no other available dates this semester. But don’t worry about your wedding day! I have enough accumulated leave at work for that. In the meantime, I’ll be sending my engagement gift via courier. It’s the beautiful scarf we saw in Milan, the one we saw after talking about you and Robert’s compatibility! My friend had a recent business trip there, so I asked him to purchase it. I’m telling you now so that you can use it at the party. Think of it as an assurance of a match made in heaven! That’s all for now. Post pictures of everything! Love, Lily
Dear Angela,

I’m
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so
happy to know that you and Robert are
finally
engaged. It feels like
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just
yesterday when you were asking me for advice about whether he was the one meant for you. I can’t wait to
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see
you in your wedding dress!

I know you’re
currently
busy preparing for your engagement party, and
of course
, starting your wedding preparations,
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so
forgive me in advance for adding to the
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stress
. Unfortunately, I can't
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make
it to your engagement party
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because
it coincides with my comprehensive exams for my master's. I tried rescheduling,
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but
my dean says there are no other available dates this semester.

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But
don’t worry about your wedding day! I have
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enough
accumulated
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leave
at work for that. In the meantime, I’ll be sending my engagement gift via courier. It’s the
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beautiful
scarf we
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saw
in Milan, the one we
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saw
after talking about you and Robert’s compatibility! My friend had a recent business trip there,
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so
I asked him to
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purchase
it. I’m telling you
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now
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so
that you can
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use
it at the party.
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Think
of it as an assurance of a match made in heaven!

That’s all for
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now
. Post pictures of everything!

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Love
,

Lily
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IELTS letter You have been invited to the engagement party of a friend from another country. You cannot go but you have bought a gift for him/her. W

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201 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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