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Write a formal letter of 720-750 words applying for the job

Write a formal letter of 720-750 words applying for the job p1kqd

Dear Mr. /Mrs, I want to apply for a job as a waiter in the store "BandB Milktea and coffee", as I have seen your job advert in the shop's fan pages. I think I'm a perfect candidate for this job as I already have a lot of valuable professional experience and I enjoy working with people. I already have all the necessary skills, and I have always been interested in milk tea and I love to explore about milk tea, so I am ready to provide customers with all the details about milk tea and coffee. . Moreover, I can also speak English fluently. I am a responsible, reliable, hardworking and enthusiastic person. I am always on time. I hope I've proven I'm the best candidate for this job. I would be very grateful if I could come to your door and tell me more about my application. I can come for an interview any time of the week. If my application is successful, I will be able to start working from October 1. I am enclosing my CV. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Trang Nguyen Thi Thuy Trang.

Dear Mr. /Mrs,

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job
 as a waiter in the store Use a smart opening quote here: "“".“
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seen
 your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
job
 advert in the shop's fan pages.

I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
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job
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a lot of
 valuable professional experience and I enjoy working with This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 already have all the necessary This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
, and I have always been interested
 in milk tea and I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 to explore about milk tea, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I am ready to provide customers with all the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
 about milk tea and coffee. Don't put a space before the full stop.
.
Moreover
, I can also
 speak English fluently
.

I am a responsible, reliable, hardworking and enthusiastic person. I am always on time.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 hope I've proven I'm the best candidate for this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
job
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 would be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 grateful if I could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 to your door and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 me more about my application. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 for an interview any time of the week.

If my application is successful, I will be able to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 working from October 1. I am enclosing my CV.

I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully
,

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