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You bought a Washing machine, but it doesn't work. Write a letter

You bought a Washing machine, but it doesn't work. Write a letter pK0W2
I am writing to inform you about a product. I purchased a washing machine from your outlet vide mall on March 4. For about two weeks it's working was satisfactory. But now it has started it's trouble. It makes a loud noise and stops on its own all of sudden. The machine does not wash clothes properly. I am sure some manufacturing defect has impatient it's working. Since the machine is within the warranty period, I request you to replace it at the earliest. I have been your regular customer and purchase articles on your express recommendation and good faith. Hoping for an immediate replacement of the washing machine. Your faithfully, Marry Ray.
I am writing to inform you about a product. I
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purchased
a washing machine from your outlet vide mall on March 4. For about two weeks it's working was satisfactory.
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But
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
it has
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
Did you mean "its" (possessive pronoun) instead of 'it's' (=it is)?
it's
trouble. It
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makes
a loud noise and
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stops
on its
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
Consider using "all of a sudden" or "all of the sudden".
all of sudden
. The machine does not wash clothes
properly
. I am sure
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
manufacturing defect has impatient it's working.

Since the machine is within the warranty period, I request you to replace it at the earliest. I have been your regular customer and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
articles on your express recommendation and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
faith. Hoping for an immediate replacement of the washing machine.

Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)
Your
faithfully
,

Marry Ray.

IELTS letter You bought a Washing machine, but it doesn't work. Write a letter

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
113 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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