Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

You have recently missed a project deadline which resulted in your company losing an important client. Write a letter to your senior director. In your letter • apologise for what happened • explain why you missed the deadline • tell him/her how you will avoid this situation in future.

You have recently missed a project deadline which resulted in your company losing an important client. Write a letter to your senior director. In your letter • apologise for what happened • explain why you missed the deadline • tell him/her how you will avoid this situation in future. AByqx
Dear Sir/Madam, I would like to apologise for not completing a project within the set deadlines. I am sincerely sorry for not being able to meet the project completion deadline. Though I know how important it was for the company, unfortunately I was failed to make it within the timeline and due to which our company lost one of its important customers. The reason for missing the project deadline was that I had a car accident on the date of project submission. Although the accident was not serious, I was taken to hospital for check up and not allowed to leave till doctor permitted me. In future, I assure you that I will never wait till the last day to complete the project. Rather I would always try to finish a day before, so that any unavoidable situation should not become the reason for not meeting the timeline. I hope you will forgive me and be assured of my commitment to this company and its future. Yours faithfully, Manu
Dear Sir/Madam,

I would like to
Possible spelling mistake. 'apologise' is British English.
apologise
for not completing a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
project
within the set deadlines.

I am
sincerely
sorry for not being able to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
project
completion deadline. Though I know how
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
it was for the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
, unfortunately I
was failed
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
it within the timeline and due to which our
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
lost one of its
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
customers.

The reason for missing the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
project
deadline was that I had a car accident on the date of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
project
submission. Although the accident was not serious, I
was taken
to hospital for
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
check
up and not
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
allowed
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
till doctor permitted me.

Did you mean: "In the future"?
In future
, I assure you that I will never wait till the last day to complete the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
project
.
Rather
I would always try to finish a day
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that any unavoidable situation should not become the reason for not meeting the timeline.

I hope you will forgive me and
be assured
of my commitment to this
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
and its future.

Yours
faithfully
,

Possible spelling mistake found.
Manu
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS letter You have recently missed a project deadline which resulted in your company losing an important client. Write a letter to your senior director. In your letter • apologise for what happened • explain why you missed the deadline • tell him/her how you will avoid this situation in future.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
168 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts
  • 5.5band
    Letter writing of home to lost anything which they want
    To, Respected Mr. Shah, Hello, This is Vilian, your neighbour and i am writing this letter to you for apologizing for the noise being created for the last few days. As you might not be aware that I am experiencing leakage from sealing since last few days and it is causing me alot of trouble to ca...
  • 5.5band
    Complain letter about unfair mark in the examination
    Dear Mrs, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction about my mark which you put me two days ago at the final examination. I am one of your 409-group students who is the fourth course at the Termez state university. I believe you can appreciate how disappointed I was when I took my writing examinati...
  • 5.5band
    You Relocated To An Overseas Country Recently And Shipped Your Furniture Through A Shipping Company
    I am writing to tell you about my damaged goods. I used your shipping company to send my furniture and upon unpacking, I realised they were severely damaged. I hope we can find possible solutions to resolve this issue. My household furniture was delivered to your company on the 15th July in Lagos, ...
  • 6band
    A letter to suggest a subject to your cousin
    Hello Ellen, I hope this letter finds you well. I’m glad to hear from you. Congratulations to your achievement and welcome to the new adventure in university. As a new graduate from university, I hope to share some helpful information with you. On the one hand, many of my fiends tend to study busi...
  • 5.5band
    Write a letter to the faculty dean requesting for the fund for your meaningful project as a president of FELTE Youth Council
    Dear Ms. Nguyen, I’m writing on behalf of the president of the FELTE Youth Council to request funding to support our meaningful project called “Leadership skills”. Our project is expected to be implemented and held in early January 2022 at Vu Dinh Lien Hall - University of Languages and Internation...
  • 5.5band
    Application letter to channel director.
    Dear mr Baron, I am writing to apply for a job of journalist at your tv channel which I saw advertised in '' Morning news '' programme. I am twenty - four years old and obtained a degree in journalism in Tashlent State Journalism Institute in 2019. I feel, I have a plenty of qualification needed for...