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Complain letter about unfair mark in the examination

Complain letter about unfair mark in the examination Wmr0b
Dear Mrs, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction about my mark which you put me two days ago at the final examination. I am one of your 409-group students who is the fourth course at the Termez state university. I believe you can appreciate how disappointed I was when I took my writing examination paper yesterday. I was very shocked. Because, You crossed out all necessary and right words, phrases, collocations on my writing essay. At that time I phoned my teacher who teaches me IELTS and asked her whether my mistakes were really wrong or right. I read her all of my writing task. She said that my essay was written correctly. I thought my writing essay was worth higher degree than others but you put me lower one with aimless. I trust this matter will receive your immediate attention. You will recheck my writing and put fair mark for it. Yours faithfully Mokhinur.
Dear Mrs, I am
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writing
to express my dissatisfaction about my mark which you put me two days ago at the final examination. I am one of your 409-group students who
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is
the fourth course at the
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Termez
state university. I believe you can appreciate how disappointed I was when I took my
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writing
examination paper yesterday.
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I
was
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very
shocked.
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Because
, You crossed out all necessary and right words, phrases, collocations on my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
writing
essay. At that time I phoned my teacher who teaches me IELTS and asked her whether my mistakes were
really
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
wrong
or right. I read her all of my
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writing
task. She said that my essay
was written
correctly
. I
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thought
my
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writing
essay was worth higher degree than others
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but
you put me lower one with aimless. I trust this matter will receive your immediate attention. You will recheck my
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writing
and put
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fair
mark for it. Yours
faithfully
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Mokhinur
.
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IELTS letter Complain letter about unfair mark in the examination

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
156 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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