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Complain letter about unfair mark in the examination

Complain letter about unfair mark in the examination Wmr0b

Dear Mrs, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction about my mark which you put me two days ago at the final examination. I am one of your 409-group students who is the fourth course at the Termez state university. I believe you can appreciate how disappointed I was when I took my writing examination paper yesterday. I was very shocked. Because, You crossed out all necessary and right words, phrases, collocations on my writing essay. At that time I phoned my teacher who teaches me IELTS and asked her whether my mistakes were really wrong or right. I read her all of my writing task. She said that my essay was written correctly. I thought my writing essay was worth higher degree than others but you put me lower one with aimless. I trust this matter will receive your immediate attention. You will recheck my writing and put fair mark for it. Yours faithfully Mokhinur.

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 to express my dissatisfaction about my mark which you put me two days ago at the final examination. I am one of your 409-group students who Did you mean "am", "are", "aren"? Alternatively, check whether the singular of 'students' should be used.amarearen
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 the fourth course at the Possible spelling mistake found.Termed
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 state university. I believe you can appreciate how disappointed I was when I took my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprinthandwritingscriptcalligraphy
writing
 examination paper yesterday. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
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very
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, You crossed out all necessary and right words, phrases, collocations on my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprinthandwritingscriptcalligraphy
writing
 essay. At that time I phoned my teacher who teaches me IELTS and asked her whether my mistakes were really
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:incorrect
wrong
 or right. I read her all of my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprinthandwritingscriptcalligraphy
writing
 task. She said that my essay was written
correctly
. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonedassumedbelievedconsidered
thought
 my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprinthandwritingscriptcalligraphy
writing
 essay was worth higher degree than others This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 you put me lower one with aimless. I trust this matter will receive your immediate attention. You will recheck my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprinthandwritingscriptcalligraphy
writing
 and put This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :equitable
fair
 mark for it. Yours faithfully
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