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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words. A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper. Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: explain what you are currently doing describe your suitability for this area of work say when you can attend an interview

A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper. Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: explain what you are currently doing describe your suitability for this area of work say when you can attend an interview VelQ
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter with reference to the job of waitresses, that you posted in the newspaper last week. Begin with my current situation, I am a student of hospitality and management at Humber College, Etobicoke. As my study is related to this field and to pursue this career in the future. I need to start with waitresses. Moreover, I am also familiar with the skills, Precautions and requirements of this job. As, how to maintain safety at the workplace. In addition to it, I reside at 5 min walk from your restaurant. This is beneficial for both of us, As, you can call me anytime in an emergency, When needed. Also, it is easy for me to reach there early as possible. I have attached my resume with the letter. I could attend the interview anytime you wanted next week except for Monday Afternoon. Because of my college schedule. Should you have any questions. Do not hesitate to contact me. I will look forward to your reply Thank you. Yours Sincerely, Irbanjeet kaur jassal,
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter with reference to the job of waitresses, that you posted in the newspaper last week.

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Begin
with my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
situation, I am a student of hospitality and management at Humber College,
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Etobicoke
. As my study
is related
to this field and to pursue this career in the future. I need to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
with waitresses.
Moreover
, I am
also
familiar with the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
, Precautions and requirements of this job.
“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
, how to maintain safety at the workplace.

In addition
to it, I reside at 5 min walk from your restaurant. This is beneficial for both of us, As, you can call me anytime in an emergency, When needed.
Also
, it is easy for me to reach there early as possible.

I have attached my resume with the letter. I could attend the interview anytime you wanted
next
week
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
except for
Monday Afternoon.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Because
of my college schedule. Should you have any questions. Do not hesitate to contact me. I will look forward to your reply Thank you.

Yours
Sincerely
,

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Irbanjeet
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kaur
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jassal
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IELTS letter A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper. Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: explain what you are currently doing describe your suitability for this area of work say when you can attend an interview

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
178 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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