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You have recently e ordered an item through the internet, but are not happy with the purchase. write a letter to the company in your letter: describe what you purchased , explain why you are not happy with purchase , tell them what you would like them to do about situation.

You have recently e ordered an item through the internet, but are not happy with the purchase. write a letter to the company in your letter: describe what you purchased, explain why you are not happy with purchase, tell them what you would like them to do about situation. e5eGO
I am writing with regard to express my dissatisfaction with the item I purchased from your website known as www. Homeshop. com. Recently, I bought a Lenovo laptop from your application via order number 154. When I was searching for laptop on your website, one of the advertisements was assuring that it was the latest brand and best to purchase. by getting fascinated, I got ready to buy it. Unfortunately, It did not get started once it arrived home. when I turn the laptop on, its screen flickers and then nothing happened. I I felt really desperated. as I was promised to my only son to get a laptop on his birthday. I would like to request you either replace the laptop with new one or refund my money so that I could buy another one for my son. Moreover, I suggest you to please check the electronic equipments before dispatching so that customers do not have to face problem later on. I look forward to hearing a Swift resolution. Yours faithfully, Kanwal
I am writing with regard to express my dissatisfaction with the item I
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purchased
from your website known as
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www
.
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Homeshop
.
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com
.

Recently, I
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bought
a Lenovo
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laptop
from your application via order number 154. When I was searching for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
laptop
on your website, one of the advertisements was assuring that it was the latest brand and best to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
by
getting fascinated, I
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got
ready to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
it. Unfortunately, It did not
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get
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started
once it arrived home.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
when
I turn the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
laptop
on, its screen flickers and then nothing happened.
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I I
felt
really
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desperated
.
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as
I
was promised
to my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
son to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
laptop
on his birthday.

I would like to request you either replace the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
laptop
with new one or refund my money
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so
that I could
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
another one for my son.
Moreover
, I suggest you to
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please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
check
the electronic equipments
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
dispatching
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that customers do not
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
face problem later on.

I look forward to hearing a Swift resolution. Yours
faithfully
,
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
Kanwal

IELTS letter You have recently e ordered an item through the internet, but are not happy with the purchase. write a letter to the company in your letter: describe what you purchased, explain why you are not happy with purchase, tell them what you would like them to do about situation.

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