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A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper. Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: explain what you are currently doing describe your suitability for this area of work say when you can attend an interview

A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper. Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: explain what you are currently doing describe your suitability for this area of work say when you can attend an interview GMNaw
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter in regard to the advertisement seen in New York Times for a post of waitress to your new Italian restaurant opening by the next week in Los Angeles I work as a waitress in Mangiamoci su restaurant in the central city, New York. I have been working in this area for almost 3 years. As the name suggests it's a famous Italian restaurant serving all the delicacies from Italy and one of the busiest dine-in outlet in the city. I have completed my bachelor's degree in hotel management from the famous Les Roches international school of hotel management, Switzerland and on completing the course had a great opportunity to do my internship in Grand Hotel National, Lucerne. As I have possessed the right amount of training and skills in detailing the different types of customers, I would be the best fit for your new restaurant. I will be relocating to Los Angeles by end of this week and would be available for the interview from next week onwards anytime. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Vachana Rose
Dear Sir,

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Italian restaurant opening by the
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restaurant in the central city,
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York. I have been working in this area for almost 3 years. As the name suggests it's a
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Italian restaurant serving all the delicacies from Italy and one of the busiest dine-in outlet in the city.

I have completed my bachelor's degree in hotel management from the
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Les
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international school of hotel management, Switzerland and on completing the course had a great opportunity to do my internship in Grand Hotel National,
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. As I have possessed the right amount of training and
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skills
in detailing the
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different
types of customers, I would be the best fit for your
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new
restaurant.

I will be relocating to Los Angeles by
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end
of this week and would be available for the interview from
next
week onwards anytime.

Looking forward to hearing from you
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.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Rose
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IELTS letter A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper. Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: explain what you are currently doing describe your suitability for this area of work say when you can attend an interview

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7 paragraphs
186 words
6.0
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