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A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper. Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: explain what you are currently doing describe your suitability for this area of work say when you can attend an interview

A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper. Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: explain what you are currently doing describe your suitability for this area of work say when you can attend an interview r8LJN
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to express my keen interest with regards to your advertisement published in Deccan Herald on 25th June 2020 for waiters. Let me introduce myself. I am Monica, working as a waitress in ITC Grand Chola for the last 5 years, with an overall work experience of about 9 years. My current job involves table management, order placement, and final bill settlement. I am fluent in English, Tamil and can also converse in Hindi. In case of emergencies, I have experience doubling up as a sous-chef for South Indian cuisine. Your job description is similar to my current activities and I could be the right fit for the job. It would be my great pleasure to meet you in person and discuss the opportunity further. I am available for an interview after 4 pm on all days, as I work morning shifts that end at 3 pm. Please find my resume and reference letters enclosed for your perusal. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Monica
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter to express my keen interest
Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".
with regards to
your advertisement published in Deccan Herald on 25th June 2020 for waiters.

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Let
me introduce myself. I am Monica, working as a waitress in ITC Grand
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Chola
for the last 5 years, with an
overall
work experience of about 9 years. My
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
job involves table management, order placement, and final bill settlement. I am fluent in English, Tamil and can
also
converse in Hindi. In case of emergencies, I have experience doubling up as a sous-chef for South Indian cuisine. Your job description is similar to my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
activities and I could be the right fit for the job.

It would be my great pleasure to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
you in person and discuss the opportunity
further
. I am available for an interview after 4 pm on all days, as I work morning shifts that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
at 3 pm.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
find my resume and reference letters enclosed for your perusal.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours
faithfully
,

Monica

IELTS letter A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper. Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: explain what you are currently doing describe your suitability for this area of work say when you can attend an interview

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  American English
7 paragraphs
172 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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