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A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper. Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: explain what you are currently doing describe your suitability for this area of work say when you can attend an interview

A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper. Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: explain what you are currently doing describe your suitability for this area of work say when you can attend an interview 3aAEJ
Dear Sir/Madame. I am writing you in order to apply for a waiter position at your company. My experience as a waiter includes working in a "LeMond" restaurant for five years. During that time I was considered to be one of the best waiters of the staff and I was loved by the clients. I am currently unemployed due to moving to another country from Russia and I would like to continue working as a waiter at your company. I believe I am the best candidate for this job, due to the fact that I am hard working, easy going, handle multitasking well and I am great at working under pressure. Should you have any questions on the matter of my experience and personal characteristics, please feel free to contact me and I would be glad to answer them at an interview, which I can attend at any given time. Best regards, Alexey
Dear Sir/Madame.

I am writing you in order to apply for a
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waiter
position at your
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company
.

My experience as a
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waiter
includes
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working
in a
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LeMond
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"
restaurant for five years. During that time I
was considered
to be one of the best
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waiters
of the
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staff and
I was
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loved
by the clients.

I am
currently
unemployed due to moving to another country from Russia and I would like to continue
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working
as a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waiter
at your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
.

I believe I am the best candidate for this job, due to the fact that I am
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hard
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working
, easy going, handle multitasking
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well and
I am great at
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working
under pressure.

Should you have any questions on the matter of my experience and personal characteristics,
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please
feel free to contact me and I would be glad to answer them at an interview, which I can attend at any
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given
time.

Best regards,

Alexey

IELTS letter A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper. Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: explain what you are currently doing describe your suitability for this area of work say when you can attend an interview

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
152 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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