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You have paid for a cricket course at a Sports Club, but due to a medical reason cannot complete the entire course. Write a letter to the course director. In your letter, explain your interest in the course describe your problems find out if a refund is possible

You have paid for a cricket course at a Sports Club, but due to a medical reason cannot complete the entire course. Write a letter to the course director. In your letter, explain your interest in the course describe your problems find out if a refund is possible 3jAJ

Dear Sir/Mam, I am writing this letter to express my sincere apology for discontinuing with the current cricket training session at your athletic club, because of my health condition. Since childhood I had a keen interest toward this sport. My dream is to enter the Indian cricket team someday. Therefore, in order to pursue my goal, I enrolled for this outstanding program at your prestigious academy. Unfortunately, i got a fracture on my knee due to an accident and doctor has suggested me to take complete rest for next 3 months. I wanted to check if there is a possibility for reimbursement of the amount paid or there is an option to keep the course on hold for some time. It would be really hepful, if you can help me with the refund or any alternative option to continue the sessions. Awaiting for your response. Yours Sincerly, Ginu Thomas

Dear Sir/Mam,

I am writing this letter to express my sincere apology for discontinuing with the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
 cricket training session at your athletic club, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of my health condition.

“Since” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Since
The comma is probably missing here: "childhood, I".childhood, I
childhood I
 had a keen interest toward this sport. My dream is to enter the Indian cricket team someday. Therefore
, in order to pursue my goal, I enrolled for this outstanding program at your prestigious academy.

Unfortunately, Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 a fracture on my knee due to an accident and doctor has suggested me to take complete rest for next
 3 months.

I wanted to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 if there is a possibility for reimbursement of the amount paid or there is an option to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 the course on hold for This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 time. It would be really
Possible spelling mistake found.helpful
hepful
, if you can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 me with the refund or any alternative option to continue the sessions.

Did you mean "awaiting" or "waiting for"?AwaitingWaiting for
Awaiting for
 your response.

Yours Possible spelling mistake found.Sincerely
Sincerly
,

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Ginu
 Thomas