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Last week you were on a flight to London. Unfortunately, when you got off the plane, you left a bag there. You did not remember about the bag until you got to your hotel. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter explain what has happened describe the bag and its contents say what you would like them to do about this problem

Last week you were on a flight to London. Unfortunately, when you got off the plane, you left a bag there. You did not remember about the bag until you got to your hotel. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter explain what has happened describe the bag and its contents say what you would like them to do about this problem 3jYX
Dear Sir or Madam, I'm Ruby Stevenson, and undergraduate student, and my student ID is 21403451. I live in room 42 in the Hillside Residence Halls with my roommate Susie Baker. This is to bring to your attention that my roommate in question is making it impossible for me to cohabit with her due to her untidiness, neglect to contribute to household chores, and her lack of regard for other people's comfort and well-being. I have been living in this room since Fall 2018 and my previous roommates can vouch for my impeccable hygiene and responsible nature. Ever since Susie moved in last semester, the room has been a total mess: it's hard to differentiate between my bed and the floor as all the surfaces are covered with her clothes, books, and shoes. Due to this, I'm having a very hard time trying to focus on schoolwork. Because she is a night-owl and stays up until the early hours of the morning watching movies, I have trouble sleeping, and as a result, have missed several of my morning classes. I would really appreciate it if you would look into the matter and arrange another room into which I could move immediately. I have my finals in two weeks and I believe that if I continue to live in this disruptive environment, I will not be able to do as well as I'm hoping to. Yours faithfully, Ruby Stevenson
Dear Sir or Madam,

I'm Ruby Stevenson, and undergraduate student, and my student ID is 21403451. I
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42 in the Hillside Residence Halls with my roommate Susie Baker. This is to bring to your attention that my roommate in question is making it impossible for me to cohabit with her due to her untidiness, neglect to contribute to household chores, and her lack of regard for other
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people
's comfort and well-being.

I have been living in this
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room
since Fall 2018 and my previous roommates can vouch for my impeccable hygiene and responsible nature. Ever since Susie
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moved
in last semester, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
room
has been a total mess: it's
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
to differentiate between my bed and the floor as all the surfaces
are covered
with her clothes, books, and shoes. Due to this, I'm having a
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very
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hard
time trying to focus on schoolwork.
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Because
she is a night-owl and stays up until the early hours of the morning watching movies, I have trouble sleeping, and
as a result
, have missed several of my morning classes.

I would
really
appreciate it if you would look into the matter and arrange another
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
room
into which I could
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move
immediately. I have my finals in two weeks and I believe that if I continue to
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live
in this disruptive environment, I will not be able to do
as well
as I'm hoping to.

Yours
faithfully
,

Ruby Stevenson
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IELTS letter Last week you were on a flight to London. Unfortunately, when you got off the plane, you left a bag there. You did not remember about the bag until you got to your hotel. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter explain what has happened describe the bag and its contents say what you would like them to do about this problem

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6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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