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You have seen an advertisement in a newspaper for a job in the city post office during your holidays. You decide to apply for the job. Write a letter to the director of the post office. In your letter, introduce yourself explain what experience and special skills you have explain why you are interested in the job

You have seen an advertisement in a newspaper for a job in the city post office during your holidays. You decide to apply for the job. Write a letter to the director of the post office. In your letter, introduce yourself explain what experience and special skills you have explain why you are interested in the job DbNj
Dear Sir/Mam, I am writing this letter in response to an advertisement found on the newspaper on last Friday. I am 25 years old young and energetic woman from a village called kottayam in kerala. I have recently completed my graduation in commerce with a distinction. I think I am eligible to apply for this job. I have worked as a clerk in a private firm for last 1. 5 years. I was into accounts section and was processing 20-30 files per day and having good typing skills and computer knowledge. I have alos done certification in accounting. Since childhood, I was dreaming for a government job. I would love this job because it reminds me about waiting for letters from my dear ones during my childhood days. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Ginu Thomas
Dear Sir/Mam,

I am writing this letter in response to an advertisement found on the newspaper on last Friday.

I am 25 years
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young and energetic woman from a village called
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kottayam
in
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kerala
.
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I
have recently completed my graduation in commerce with a distinction.
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I
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I am eligible to apply for this job.

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I
have worked as a clerk in a private firm for last 1. 5 years. I was into accounts section and was processing 20-30 files per day and having
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good
typing
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skills
and computer knowledge. I have
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alos
done certification in accounting.

Since childhood, I was dreaming for a
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government
job. I would
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love
this job
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because
it reminds me about waiting for letters from my dear ones during my childhood days.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Ginu
Thomas

IELTS letter You have seen an advertisement in a newspaper for a job in the city post office during your holidays. You decide to apply for the job. Write a letter to the director of the post office. In your letter, introduce yourself explain what experience and special skills you have explain why you are interested in the job

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  American English
8 paragraphs
138 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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