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You have recently been to stay with an old friend for a few days. You hadn't seen each other for a long time. •say how you felt about the visit •refer to something enjoyable that you did while staying with him/her •invite your friend to visit you

You have recently been to stay with an old friend for a few days. You hadn't seen each other for a long time. •say how you felt about the visit •refer to something enjoyable that you did while staying with him/her •invite your friend to visit you GXAw
Dear Anna, Hope you are doing great. Last week was a great time for me that we spend a couple of days together. I felt very excited to see you after a long interval and I thank you to arrange my accommodation in your house. You and your family treated me in a wonderful way and I thoroughly enjoyed our trip to the hill station. Even though it was a tiresome journey we spend enough time there and the outdoor dining was just awesome. One thing I forgot to tell you that your mother is an amazing cook and she is having god’s gifted hand. I really loved all the time we were together as in the past when we were in the college. It would be a great pleasure for me if you visit my house with your parents next month. My elder sister is getting married and if you come here, we will enjoy the function and if possible, we can arrange a trip to the nearby beach. Hope to see you soon, Lovingly, Johan Mary
Dear Anna,

Hope you are doing great. Last week was a great time for me that we spend a couple of days together. I felt
very
excited to
see
you after a long interval and I thank you to arrange my accommodation in your
house
.

You and your family treated me
in a wonderful way
and I
thoroughly
enjoyed our trip to the hill station.
Even though
it was a tiresome journey we spend
enough
time there and the outdoor dining was
just
awesome. One thing I forgot to
tell
you that your mother is an amazing
cook and
she is having god’s gifted hand. I
really
loved
all the time we were together as in the past when we were in the college.

It would be a great pleasure for me if you visit my
house
with your parents
next
month. My elder sister is getting married and if you
come
here, we will enjoy the function and if possible, we can arrange a trip to the nearby beach.

Hope to
see
you
soon
,

Lovingly
,

Johan Mary
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IELTS letter You have recently been to stay with an old friend for a few days. You hadn't seen each other for a long time. •say how you felt about the visit •refer to something enjoyable that you did while staying with him/her •invite your friend to visit you

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  American English
7 paragraphs
177 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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