Search
Vocabularying
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

your neigbour complin about noise.

your neigbour complin about noise. qqWP

Dear James, I was very shocked to get your letter saying that the noise from my flat has been spoiling your evenings and causing you some distress. I am really, really sorry about that. I had no idea that you would be able to hear so much, so I hope you will accept my apologies. As you may have guessed, I am trying to refit my kitchen in the evenings when I get home from work. Unfortunately it is all getting longer than expected and I have been having problems with getting things to fit properly. This has meant to a lot of banging and hammering. As the kitchen is still not finished, I have decided to call in a professional builder who will finish the work in the next day or two. He’ll work only during daytime hours, so you won’t be disturbed in the evenings again, I promise. Sorry to have caused these problems, Bill. (157 words)

Dear James,

I was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 shocked to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 your letter saying that the noise from my flat has been spoiling your evenings and causing you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 distress. I am really
, really
 sorry about that. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 had no This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
 that you would be able to hear This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 much, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I hope you will accept my apologies.

As you may have guessed, I am trying to refit my kitchen in the evenings when I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 home from work. Unfortunately it is all getting longer than This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipated
expected
 and I have been having problems with getting things to fit properly
. This has meant to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 banging and hammering.

As the kitchen is still
 not finished, I have decided to call in a professional builder who will finish the work in the next
 day or two. He’ll work This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 during daytime hours, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 you won’t be disturbed
 in the evenings again, I promise.

Sorry to have caused these problems,

Bill.

(157 words)