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your neigbour complin about noise.

your neigbour complin about noise. qqWP
Dear James, I was very shocked to get your letter saying that the noise from my flat has been spoiling your evenings and causing you some distress. I am really, really sorry about that. I had no idea that you would be able to hear so much, so I hope you will accept my apologies. As you may have guessed, I am trying to refit my kitchen in the evenings when I get home from work. Unfortunately it is all getting longer than expected and I have been having problems with getting things to fit properly. This has meant to a lot of banging and hammering. As the kitchen is still not finished, I have decided to call in a professional builder who will finish the work in the next day or two. He’ll work only during daytime hours, so you won’t be disturbed in the evenings again, I promise. Sorry to have caused these problems, Bill. (157 words)
Dear James,

I was
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very
shocked to
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get
your letter saying that the noise from my flat has been spoiling your evenings and causing you
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some
distress. I am
really
,
really
sorry about that.
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I
had no
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idea
that you would be able to hear
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so
much,
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so
I hope you will accept my apologies.

As you may have guessed, I am trying to refit my kitchen in the evenings when I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
home from work. Unfortunately it is all getting longer than
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
expected
and I have been having problems with getting things to fit
properly
. This has meant to
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
banging and hammering.

As the kitchen is
still
not finished, I have decided to call in a professional builder who will finish the work in the
next
day or two. He’ll work
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
during daytime hours,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
you won’t
be disturbed
in the evenings again, I promise.

Sorry to have caused these problems,

Bill.

(157 words)

IELTS letter your neigbour complin about noise.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
158 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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