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During a recent plane journey,you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. you talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. Write a letter to this businessman .In your letter *remind him when and where you met *tell him what kind of job you are interested in *say why you think you would be suitable for the job.

During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. you talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter *remind him when and where you met *tell him what kind of job you are interested in *say why you think you would be suitable for the job. OmAN
Dear Kamal, How are you? I hope you’re well. I think you might be rememberd my name Amita Dholakia, I seated next to you during the journey from Mumbai to Rajkot last saturday in Air India flight. During our journey, you had discussed about your restaurants chain business. You shared reason for your frequent travelling journey for expanding business in the another states. I am writing this letter, to let you know about my job preference. I have two years of experience as manager in Cafe Coffee Day which is also a chain of coffee shops. I have completed master in business administration as finance so I’m keen to continue the position as the manager in your any of the restaurant. But, I came to know by our discussion there is a job position at Rajkot, if possible I would like to choose this city, which is my home town. In addition, I have my own home in my town so I can shift from Mumbai to Rajkot. Therefore there will be no more expences on renting home and I get home cooked food. Moreover, I can live with my family after 2 years. I am waiting for your reply as early as possible. Yours sincerely, Amita
Dear Kamal,

How are you? I hope you’re well. I
think
you might be
rememberd
my name
Amita
Dholakia
, I seated
next
to you during the journey from Mumbai to Rajkot last
saturday
in Air India flight. During our journey, you had
discussed about your
restaurants chain business. You shared reason for your frequent travelling journey for expanding business in the another states.

I am writing this letter, to
let
you know about my job preference. I have two years of experience as manager in
Cafe
Coffee Day which is
also
a chain of coffee shops.
I
have completed master in business administration as finance
so
I’m keen to continue the position as the manager in your any of the restaurant.
But
, I came to know by our discussion there is a job position at Rajkot, if possible I would like to choose this city, which is my home town.

In addition
, I have my
own
home in my town
so
I can shift from Mumbai to Rajkot.
Therefore
there will be no more
expences
on renting home and I
get
home cooked food.
Moreover
, I can
live
with my family after 2 years.

I am waiting for your reply as early as possible.

Yours
sincerely
,

Amita
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IELTS letter During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. you talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter *remind him when and where you met *tell him what kind of job you are interested in *say why you think you would be suitable for the job.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
206 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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