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You have recently been to stay with an old friend for a few days. You hadn't seen each other for a long time. •say how you felt about the visit •refer to something enjoyable that you did while staying with him/her •invite your friend to visit you

You have recently been to stay with an old friend for a few days. You hadn't seen each other for a long time. •say how you felt about the visit •refer to something enjoyable that you did while staying with him/her •invite your friend to visit you pYWD
Dear XX, I'm writing to thank you for a really enjoyable visit. It was good to see you after so long, and to be able to spend some time with you, talking about old schoolfriends and teachers. Now that I'm back home, I keep thinking about how good it was to be somewhere quiet and peaceful. I particularly enjoyed our trip to the wildlife sanctuary and appreciated the opportunity to see so many rare birds and animals. It's made me think that I should try and do more to protect them, so I'm having a look on the internet to see what sort of organisation there are. Perhaps next time we get together you could come and visit me. There are plenty of places we can go and my brother would really like to see you. Let me know when you might be free to come here and we can fix something up. Look forward to hearing from you soon.
Dear XX,

I'm writing to thank you for a
really
enjoyable visit. It was
good
to
see
you after
so
long, and to be able to spend
some
time with you, talking about
old
schoolfriends
and teachers.

Now
that I'm back home, I
keep
thinking about how
good
it was to be somewhere quiet and peaceful. I
particularly
enjoyed our trip to the wildlife sanctuary and appreciated the opportunity to
see
so
many
rare birds and animals. It's made me
think
that I should
try and
do more to protect them,
so
I'm having a look on the internet to
see
what sort of
organisation
there are.

Perhaps
next
time we
get
together you could
come
and visit me. There are
plenty
of places we can go and my brother would
really
like to
see
you.
Let
me know when you might be free to
come
here and
we can
fix
something up.

Look forward to hearing from you
soon
.
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IELTS letter You have recently been to stay with an old friend for a few days. You hadn't seen each other for a long time. •say how you felt about the visit •refer to something enjoyable that you did while staying with him/her •invite your friend to visit you

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
160 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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