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You have recently been in a sports centre and noticed some issues in the changing rooms. Write a letter of complaint to the manager of the centre and say – What was the problem? – Explain why it is bothering you. – Suggest a possible solution.

You have recently been in a sports centre and noticed some issues in the changing rooms. Write a letter of complaint to the manager of the centre and say – What was the problem? – Explain why it is bothering you. – Suggest a possible solution. 7a0AA
DEAR SIR/MADAM, I AM WRITING THIS LETTER TO ADDRESSED SOME MENACE IN YOUR BADMINTON SPORTS ACADEMY CENTER WHICH IHAVE FOUND DURING MY LAST VISITE ON SUNDAY. I AM SEFALI PATEL, I HAVE BEEN YOUR BADMINTON SPORT CLUB MEMBER SINCE 1999 WHERE I USED TO COME EVERY WEEKEND TO PRCTICE MY SPORTS SKILLS. I HAVE NEVER NOTICED SUCH ISSUES BEFORE, BUT SINCE LAST TWO VISITES, I HAVE MARLKED SOME PROBLEMS WITH HANGER SPACE AND DIRTY FLOOR INSIDE THE CHANGING ROOM. WHEN I WENT INSIDE THE CHANGING ROOM I FOUND THAT THERE WERE NO PLACE TO HANG MY CLOTHS EVEN THE FLOOR WAS DIRTY TOO. HENCE, I COULD KEPT THE CLOTH ON THE FLOOR AS WELL. TO SOLVE THIS ISSUES I WOULD SUGGEST IS YOU REPLACE THE LOCK OF ALL THE CHANGING ROOM WOULD BE GREAT AND I ADVISE YOU TO HAVE HANGERS FOR EACH ROOM AS WELL FOR THE CUSTOMER'S CONVINIENCE. ADDITIONALLY, HAVE THE PROFESSIONAL CLEANING STAFF FOR HOUSE KEEPING. THIS MAKE THE CUSTOMER HASSALE FREE AND FASTER CHANGING TIME. I HOPE ON MY NEXT VISITE I WOULD HAVE THE PROPER LOCKING DEVICE AND SOME PLACE TO HANG MY THINGS. LOOKINGB FORWARD TO SEE THE CHANGE IN THE SPORT CENTER ON MY NEXT VISITE. YOUR SINCERELY, SEFALI PATEL
DEAR SIR/MADAM,

I AM WRITING THIS LETTER
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TO ADDRESSED
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SOME
MENACE IN YOUR BADMINTON
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SPORTS
ACADEMY CENTER WHICH
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IHAVE
FOUND DURING MY LAST
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VISITE ON
SUNDAY. I AM
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SEFALI
PATEL, I HAVE BEEN YOUR BADMINTON
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SPORT
CLUB MEMBER SINCE 1999 WHERE I
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USED
TO
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COME
EVERY WEEKEND TO
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PRCTICE
MY
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SPORTS
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SKILLS
.

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I
HAVE NEVER NOTICED SUCH ISSUES
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BEFORE
,
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BUT
SINCE LAST TWO
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VISITES
, I HAVE
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MARLKED
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SOME
PROBLEMS WITH HANGER SPACE AND DIRTY FLOOR INSIDE THE
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CHANGING
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ROOM
. WHEN I WENT INSIDE THE
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CHANGING
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ROOM
I FOUND THAT THERE WERE NO PLACE TO HANG MY CLOTHS EVEN THE FLOOR WAS DIRTY TOO.
HENCE
, I COULD
The verb 'COULD' requires the base form of the verb: "keep"
KEPT
THE CLOTH ON THE FLOOR
AS WELL
.

TO SOLVE THIS ISSUES I WOULD SUGGEST IS YOU REPLACE THE LOCK OF ALL THE
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CHANGING
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ROOM
WOULD BE GREAT AND I ADVISE YOU TO HAVE HANGERS FOR EACH
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ROOM
AS WELL
FOR THE CUSTOMER'S
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CONVINIENCE
.
ADDITIONALLY
, HAVE THE PROFESSIONAL CLEANING STAFF FOR
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HOUSE
KEEPING. THIS
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MAKE
THE CUSTOMER
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HASSALE
FREE AND FASTER
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CHANGING
TIME. I HOPE ON MY
NEXT
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VISITE
I WOULD HAVE THE PROPER LOCKING DEVICE AND
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SOME
PLACE TO HANG MY THINGS.

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LOOKINGB
FORWARD TO
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SEE
THE
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CHANGE
IN THE
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SPORT
CENTER ON MY
NEXT
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VISITE
.

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YOUR
SINCERELY
,

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SEFALI
PATEL

IELTS letter You have recently been in a sports centre and noticed some issues in the changing rooms. Write a letter of complaint to the manager of the centre and say – What was the problem? – Explain why it is bothering you. – Suggest a possible solution.

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