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You have been asked to write a letter of invitation to Professor W. Chan Kim asking him to give a talk on National Blue Ocean Strategy (NBOS). You should provide the following details in your letter:

You have been asked to write a letter of invitation to Professor W. Chan Kim asking him to give a talk on National Blue Ocean Strategy (NBOS). You should provide the following details in your letter: dopVp
Dear Professor W. Chan Kim, I'm writing to ask whether you would be willing to present a talk on National Blue Ocean Strategy (NBOS) at the conference as an invited speaker. As the Program Coordinator for this conference, I have been asked to write a letter to you regarding this. The Eleventh Malaysia Plan, 2016-2020, the five-year strategic development plan, lays out the strategies in Malaysia’s final leg in the journey towards becoming an advanced nation by 2020. The Eleventh Malaysia Plan used Blue Ocean Strategy tools and frameworks to formulate highimpact, low-cost national strategies that are able to be rapidly executed. Therefore, you need to explain to audience the purpose of NBOS. The NBOS conference will start on 13 January 2020 until 15 January 2020 at 8. 00am to 5. 00pm everyday. Venue will be at Kuala Lumpur Convention Centre (KLCC). Invited speakers will be given one hour long, including a 10 minute question-answer session. In appreciation of your agreement to provide a talk, we would provide the cost of an economy class airfare from your home institution to the conference, hotel accommodations during the conference, and free registration to the conference. Estimated participants for the conference about 200 people which including ministers, officers and universities students. Regards that the presentation should cover all level of participants. You are allowed to do some jokes to avoid participant from fall asleep. I do hope that you will be able to accept this invitation and respond back to us. Thank you very much. Your sincerely, Rajnikant
Dear Professor W. Chan Kim,

I'm writing to ask whether you would be willing to present a talk on National Blue Ocean Strategy (
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NBOS
) at the
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conference
as an invited speaker. As the Program Coordinator for this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
conference
, I have
been asked
to write a letter to you regarding this.

The Eleventh Malaysia Plan, 2016-2020, the five-year strategic development plan, lays out the

strategies in Malaysia’s final leg in the journey towards becoming an advanced nation by 2020.

The Eleventh Malaysia Plan
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used
Blue Ocean Strategy tools and frameworks to formulate
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highimpact
, low-cost national strategies that are able to be
rapidly
executed.
Therefore
, you need to
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explain
to audience the purpose of
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NBOS
.

The
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NBOS
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conference
will
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start
on 13 January 2020 until 15 January 2020 at 8. 00am to 5. 00pm
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everyday
. Venue will be at Kuala Lumpur Convention
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Centre
(
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KLCC
). Invited speakers will be
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given
one hour long, including a
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10 minute
question-answer session. In appreciation of your agreement to provide a talk, we would provide the cost of an economy
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class
airfare from your home institution to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
conference
, hotel accommodations during the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
conference
, and free registration to the conference.

Estimated participants for the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
conference
about 200
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people
which including ministers, officers and universities students. Regards that the presentation should cover all level of participants. You are
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allowed
to do
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some
jokes to avoid participant from fall asleep.

I do hope that you will be able to accept this invitation and respond back to us. Thank you
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very
much.

Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)
Your
sincerely
,

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Rajnikant
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IELTS letter You have been asked to write a letter of invitation to Professor W. Chan Kim asking him to give a talk on National Blue Ocean Strategy (NBOS). You should provide the following details in your letter:

Letter
  American English
9 paragraphs
254 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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