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You have recently attended a two-day course, and now the course organiser is asking for your review and comments. Write a letter to the course organiser, in your letter – Describe the course – Explain whether or not you liked the course, and why – Provide some suggestions for improvement.

You have recently attended a two-day course, and now the course organiser is asking for your review and comments. Write a letter to the course organiser, in your letter – Describe the course – Explain whether or not you liked the course, and why – Provide some suggestions for improvement. Kwj0L
Dear sir, I have recently completed my two day course ‘ computer foundation’ by you. This course is helpful for me. I am going to write feedback about this course. With regards the bright side the of course, at the first day of class I learned about the theoretically portion which is main part of the program and the next day I did some practical work which is helpful for me and on my workplace. However, the problem in this course is only the large number of student due to this am not able to clear some doubt because everyone has many question regarding the course and then class time is over. I have some solution for this course, firstly you need to should split the classes into two session morning and evening due to this lower number student can clear all the doubt and easy for understanding. Yours sincerely Talvir Grewal
Dear sir,

I have recently completed my
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two day
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course
‘ computer foundation’ by you. This
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
is helpful for me. I am going to write feedback about this course.

With regards the bright side the of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
, at the
first
day of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
I learned about the
theoretically
portion which is main part of the program and the
next
day I did
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
practical work which is helpful for me and on my workplace.
However
, the problem in this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
the large number of student due to this am not able to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
clear
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
doubt
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because
everyone has
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many question
regarding the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
and then
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
time is over.

I have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
solution for this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
,
firstly
you need to should split the classes into two session morning and evening due to this lower number student can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
clear
all the doubt and easy for understanding.

Yours
sincerely


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IELTS letter You have recently attended a two-day course, and now the course organiser is asking for your review and comments. Write a letter to the course organiser, in your letter – Describe the course – Explain whether or not you liked the course, and why – Provide some suggestions for improvement.

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151 words
6.0
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