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An email: Your trip. You recently went on a trip for two weeks. While you were away, your friend, Ken, looked after your home. When you return, you decide to write an email to Ken. In the email:

An email: Your trip. You recently went on a trip for two weeks. While you were away, your friend, Ken, looked after your home. When you return, you decide to write an email to Ken. In the email: 3aPW5
Hi ken, I just came back from my trip, I see my house it is in perfect conditions, thanks for taking care of my home while I was out. I am really excited to tell you all the wonderful things I did in these two weeks, the city was so beautiful, I went on a tour guide for all the amazing places that where there, also I ate various typical foods from there and they were so delicious. Would you be able to meet on monday, so we can talk more and I can give you the thanks in person, I have an amazing present for you. Lots of love, your friend.
Hi ken,

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came back from my trip, I
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my
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house
it is in perfect conditions, thanks for taking care of my home while I was out.

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excited to
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tell
you all the wonderful things I did in these two weeks, the city was
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so
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beautiful
, I went on a tour guide for all the amazing places that where there,
also
I ate various typical foods from
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there and
they were
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delicious.

Would you be able to
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monday
,
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so
we can talk more and I can give you the thanks in person, I have an amazing present for you.

Lots of
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love
, your friend.

IELTS letter An email: Your trip. You recently went on a trip for two weeks. While you were away, your friend, Ken, looked after your home. When you return, you decide to write an email to Ken. In the email:

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  American English
5 paragraphs
112 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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