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Mrs .Jack White is a friend of yours when you studied in the UK. He is coming to Ha Noi for an international conference. You want to invite him to Ho Chi Minh City for a short visit

Mrs. Jack White is a friend of yours when you studied in the UK. He is coming to Ha Noi for an international conference. You want to invite him to Ho Chi Minh City for a short visit r8lgm
Dear Jack, I am very glad to know that you are to take part in international conference in Ho Chi Minh City to see us after conference. I have already talked about your visit to my parents and also they plan to see you, because they have heared about you lots of time but they have never met you before that. Needless to say, a month ago we transfered to a large flat with 6rooms where is located in the city center. Although you can stay with us here. As you know my mum is perfect for cooking, and do not worry about food. I can say, I have no time to take you out to the scenic spots, and they are willing to be your guides. However, my parents have good English speech, so you will not face a problem. Before you come, please give us a call. My phone number remains the same, but in my point of view, I should atgue that my parents' call number. It is 268292717689. I will be at the airport to welcome you. We look forward to your arrival. Love Ann Brawn.
Dear Jack,

I am
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glad to know that you are to
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take part
in international conference in Ho Chi Minh City to
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see
us after conference. I have already talked about your visit to my parents and
also
they plan to
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see
you,
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because
they have
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heared
about you lots of time
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but
they have never met you
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before
that. Needless to say, a month ago we
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transfered
to a large flat with 6rooms where
is located
in the city center.
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Although
you can stay with us here. As you know my mum is perfect for cooking, and do not worry about food. I can say, I have no time to take you out to the scenic spots, and they are willing to be your guides.
However
, my parents have
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good
English speech,
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so
you will not face a problem.

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Before
you
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come
,
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please
give us a call. My phone number remains the same,
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but
in my point of view, I should
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atgue
that my parents' call number. It is 268292717689. I will be at the airport to welcome you.

We look forward to your arrival.

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Love


Ann Brawn.
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IELTS letter Mrs. Jack White is a friend of yours when you studied in the UK. He is coming to Ha Noi for an international conference. You want to invite him to Ho Chi Minh City for a short visit

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6 paragraphs
190 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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