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Write a letter to your friend Maurice, regarding your foreign trip on your research work therefore you will not be able to attend her wedding

Write a letter to your friend Maurice, regarding your foreign trip on your research work therefore you will not be able to attend her wedding r8lN6

Dear Maurice, Hope you are in good health and Happiness. We all are in good Health here. I just got your wedding invitation and I am so delight and happy for you. As from now onwards you will be having a companion or friend and so many other just in person. Remember when we were in college, I had deep interest in International business and gradually I had started my career in the same field. I always wanted to do a research in pattern of working in Australia and I am glad to say that I will be going to do this research for my company and the best part is, it’s all expense paid trip to Australia. Furthermore I had a bad news. I won’t be able to attend your wedding due to the research work as my trip scheduled at the same time. I am so much divested that I won’t be there with you on your special day. I can understand my presence will be missed moreover as soon as my research work finished. I will come right away to meet you and will have lots of talk about your wedding and hope I will still get to see your big day pictures together. Wishing you a very happy marriage life ahead and please take care and do let me know in case if you need anything from Australia. Your’s sincerely XYZ

Dear Maurice,

Hope you are in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 health and Happiness. We all are in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 Health here. I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
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invitation and
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so
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now
 onwards you will be having a companion or friend and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
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many
 other This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 in person.

Remember when we were in college, I had deep interest in International business and gradually
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started
 my career in the same field. I always wanted to do a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprobeinquiryinvestigationexplorationanalysis
research
 in pattern of working in Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).Australia, and
Australia and
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research
 for my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 and the best part is, it’s all expense paid trip to Australia.

Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Furthermore,
Furthermore
 I had a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 news. I won’t be able to attend your wedding due to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprobeinquiryinvestigationexplorationanalysis
research
 work as my trip scheduled at the same time. I am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 much divested that I won’t be there with you on your special day.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 can understand my presence will be missed
moreover
 as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprobeinquiryinvestigationexplorationanalysis
research
 work finished. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 right away to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 you and will have lots of talk about your wedding and hope I will still
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 your This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 day pictures together.

Wishing you a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 happy marriage life ahead and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
 take care and do This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me know in case if you need anything from Australia.

Did you mean "Your" or "Yours"?YourYours
Your’s
sincerely


XYZ