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Write a letter to your friend about the new situation.

Write a letter to your friend about the new situation. 6x2k8

Hi Meera, How are you? Hope you are doing well. I am writing you today to tell you the news of an election for president candidancy electing held in my county south africa. you will be amazed to know that my father being elected as the new president of south africa. On 21 march, 2021, he won the election by 20 lack votes from all over the country. He has created history by being the youngest president of the country. In South Africa election of president candidacy is one of the most amazing things for people. As the new government team is going to rule the country and what new strategies for growth and development this party will bring on the table. Right now, I am so happy for country and for my father, I wish them best of luck. I consider myself lucky being daughter of 28th youngest president of South Africa. Hope to see you very soon. give my regards to your parents. Warm Wishes, Jackie

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 my regards to your parents.

Warm Wishes,

Jackie