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You have received the invitation to take pert in your friend's brithday party.But you can not go because of your mother-in-law's ilness

You have received the invitation to take pert in your friend's brithday party. But you can not go because of your mother-in-law's ilness 0pEjG
Dear Mery, Thank you very much for inviting me to take part in your brithday party on August 28. First of all, please accept my warmest and most sincere congratulations to you. But I have to ask for you forgivness of not being able to turn up the party because my mother-in-law is ill and she has been in the hospital for 10 days. And also, on that day she will come home. As you know, I am only bride therefore I just can not tell I want to go to the party. What a pity it is to miss you brithday party! Well, to make up for the disappointment, I will visit you next week to present my greetings to you. I will give you call beforehand. Yours sincerely, Emily Smith
Dear
Mery
, Thank you
very
much for inviting me to
take part
in your
brithday
party
on August 28.
First of all
,
please
accept my warmest and most sincere congratulations to you.
But
I
have to
ask for
you
forgivness
of not being able to turn up the
party
because
my mother-in-law is
ill and
she has been in the hospital for 10 days. And
also
, on that day she will
come
home. As you know, I am
only
bride
therefore
I
just
can not
tell
I want to go to the
party
. What a pity it is to miss you
brithday
party
! Well, to
make
up for the disappointment, I will visit you
next
week to present my greetings to you. I will give you call beforehand. Yours
sincerely
, Emily
Smith
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IELTS letter You have received the invitation to take pert in your friend's brithday party. But you can not go because of your mother-in-law's ilness

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  American English
1 paragraphs
131 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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