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Letter to travel magazine for mistake

Letter to travel magazine for mistake dkpm6

Dear Sir or Madam, I would like to draw your attention on the latest issue of your travel magazine, it has article about Allahabad and details are incorrect. It is mistake and wrong information you have published. This article has shown that Allahabad University is the oldest in India but the facts is Nalanda University is the oldest. As per fact Allahabad University has established in the year of 1209 where Nalanda is in existence since 1029 and this fact details make the information of the article is incorrect. This travel magazine is popular among people and having god influence on them where such kind of wrong information will impact many. This is surprised for me that how does it not get caught while review process or it didnt in the process. This will not be wise thing to avoid facts and other verification before publish the article. This should come in your responsibility. Now as mistake has done already I highly suggest that publish the correct fact and apology in next issue. Thank you, Vibha

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