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Letter to cookery course feedback to school

Letter to cookery course feedback to school rYbp6

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to show my immense pleasure that I complete my cookery course on Dessert expo from your school and it was such a delighted experience. The class were fun and I have learnt a lot with Chef Jay. During the course I tried my hands on cupcakes and now it has level up with professional bakers. This has truly improve me as baker and now I am more confident about my cooking skills. My baking has been better and I am getting lot’s of appreciation from family and friends. As I enjoyed this course, I would suggest that to add few more variety of courses such as Indian meal and Best curry course. My family is from India so if i can get my hands on this recipe they will surly surprise. I wish all the best and will looking for new courses. Best wishes, VIbha

Dear Sir or Madam,

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 few more variety of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentseriessystemprogramplanway
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I wish all the best and will looking for new courses.

Best wishes,

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