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Write a letter to school for the problems of activity classes

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I did not get any reply for the trail mail. Also I just want to bring some concerns into your notice about Saturday activities. We do not get complete information for participating activities before the activity. As we receive the message at the time of activities. Thus it becomes very difficult for us to manage the material at the same time for related activities. Moreover we are not able to connect to the activity class at a given time because we do not get the passcode at proper time. Therefore students get fed up. I am not the only parent who is facing this depressing situation while many other parents have the same problem. So I would like to request you that if you are planning for any activity, it should be managed properly. Such students can learn something according to your planned activity. I am looking forward to hearing from you.

I did not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 any reply for the trail mail.

Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Also,
Also
 I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 want to bring This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 concerns into your notice about Saturday You use this word too often, consider replacing it withactionlifeenterpriseexercisemovement
activities
. We do not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 complete information for participating You use this word too often, consider replacing it withactionlifeenterpriseexercisemovement
activities
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 the activity.

“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
 we receive the message at the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
 of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withactionlifeenterpriseexercisemovement
activities
. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Thus,
Thus
 it becomes This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 difficult for us to manage the material at the same You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
 for related activities.

Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Moreover,
Moreover
 we are not able to connect to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withactionlifeenterpriseexercisemovement
activity
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
 at a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 we do not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 the passcode at proper You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Therefore,
Therefore
 students This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 fed up.

I am not the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 parent who is facing this depressing situation while This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 other parents have the same problem.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 I would like to request you that if you are planning for any You use this word too often, consider replacing it withactionlifeenterpriseexercisemovement
activity
, it should be managed
properly
. Such students can learn something according to your planned activity.

I am looking forward to hearing from you. 