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You have received an email from a retailer complimenting the good quality of your product. However, he feels the price is too high. Write an email (80-150 words) to reply your customer’s. Your email should include the following: • Name of your product • Confirm the good quality of your product and assure the reasonable price • Mention a discount offered • Hope for the first order

You have received an email from a retailer complimenting the good quality of your product. However, he feels the price is too high. Write an email (80-150 words) to reply your customer’s. Your email should include the following: • Name of your product • Confirm the good quality of your product and assure the reasonable price • Mention a discount offered • Hope for the first order j8p8M

Sub: Thanks for complementation and discount offer for first order. Dear Mr. White, We have received you email. Thank you so much for your complementation to our product. With reference to your order, I can see that you order 1 Gaming Laptop model LENOVO LEGION Y720. This model is the latest version of this product from branch LENOVO, which is known as one of the top 10 computer company in the world. So that they ensure the quality of their product. You said that the price is too high for this product, I can see what you mean. But Lenovo Legion Y720 is the best laptop we can recommend to you at the moment for the price range under $1500 compare to other products. By purchasing in our company, we are not only including 2-year-warranty with product, but also provide free delivery to your address. Anyways, my company policy provides to a 5% discount for the first order. So, in your case, we can give you this offer if you decide to buy our product by end of September. I hope you can reconsider about it and let me know if you want to make an order. Thank you very much. I you have any concern or doubts, please send email to me. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours Sincerely,

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Dear Mr. White,

We have received you email. Thank you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 much for your Possible spelling mistake found.implementation
complementation
 to our product.

With reference to your order, I can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 that you order 1 Gaming Laptop model LENOVO LEGION Y720.

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product
 from branch LENOVO, which is known
 as one of the top 10 computer

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company
 in the world. “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
So that
 they ensure the quality of their product.

You said that the price is too high for this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
product
, I can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 what you mean. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 Lenovo Legion Y720 is the best

laptop we can recommend to you at the moment for the price range under $1500 compare to other You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
products
. By

purchasing in our This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
, we are not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 including 2-year-warranty with You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
product
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
 provide free delivery

to your address.

Anyways, my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 policy provides to a 5% discount for the first
 order. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, in your case, we can give you this

offer if you decide to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
product
 by This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of September. I hope you can reconsider about it and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me know if

you want to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 an order.

Thank you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 much. I you have any concern or doubts, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 email to me. I look forward to hearing from

you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Yours Sincerely
, 