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The local council in the area where you live has decided to demolish an old historical building to build a shopping centre. Write a letter to the head of the council.

The local council in the area where you live has decided to demolish an old historical building to build a shopping centre. Write a letter to the head of the council. GLgLx
Dear sir/ Madam I am writing to express my dissatisfaction to the local council who decided to put down art museum into shopping centre. I have been living in this place since my childhood that why this news emotionally disturbing my mind. Although, it is in poor condition, I don’t think it needs to be changed. Because it is need to be preserved as a old heritage building. Since, many craftsman benefits from this building and giving tiredless work showing towards the museum. I know renumeration is a big problem to modify this place. However, we could raise a fund from the local community and the small company. Certainly, they will help to improve the condition of this building. I understand that the new shopping centre brings commercial benefit and employment to this area but I don’t think it can be done by losing one of the historical monuments. I am wonder that if possible you can start construction project in the abandoned cement factory in the east road. I hope you will reconsider the decision and go ahead in different site.
Dear sir/ Madam I am writing to express my dissatisfaction to the local council who decided to put down art museum into shopping
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centre
. I have been living in this place since my childhood that why this news
emotionally
disturbing my mind. Although, it is in poor condition, I don’t
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think
it needs to be
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changed
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be preserved
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old
heritage building. Since,
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many
craftsman benefits from this building and giving
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tiredless
work showing towards the museum. I know
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renumeration
is a
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big
problem to modify this place.
However
, we could raise a fund from the local community and the
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small
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company
.
Certainly
, they will
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help
to
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improve
the condition of this building. I understand that the new shopping
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centre
brings commercial benefit and employment to this area
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but
I don’t
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think
it can
be done
by losing one of the historical monuments. I am wonder that if possible you can
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start
construction project in the abandoned cement factory in the east road.
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I
hope you will reconsider the decision and go ahead in
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different
site.
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IELTS letter The local council in the area where you live has decided to demolish an old historical building to build a shopping centre. Write a letter to the head of the council.

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